Mackenzie MacDonald: Criminal Tags: Read 343 times / 0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic. Mackenzie MacDonald: Criminal on August 10, 2012, 06:06:29 PM Your Nickname: LukeHave you read and do you agree to the Code of Conduct?: YesAre you over thirteen? YesHow did you find us and decide to write with us? FriendIf you have written other characters here: YesIf Yes, list them all: Rohan Graham, Emile LawsonIs this a Primary or Secondary Character?: PrimaryMackenzie MacDonald, CriminalFull Character Name: Mackenzie Malcolm MacDonald Character Birthday & Age: March 19th, 1983, 25.City & Country of Birth: Oulton Broad Sulffolk, EnglandBlood Purity: HalfbloodAlma Mater: HogwartsCover Job (If any): Dragon KeeperType of Criminal: Smuggler/VandalAllegiances / Loyalties / Political Faction: NoneHave they committed any previous crimes?: YesIf yes, what were they and were they convicted?: several vandalization crimes scattered around the ministry and other wizarding govt property, (although direct ministry attacks are nonexisistant)including graffiti, destruction of property, and, burning building and establishments, strictly wizarding, e.g. diagon alley stores and MoM phoneboothsWhat crimes might you commit in the future? Discuss all possible: Wand thieving, vandalizing MoM property, destroying Wizard property e.g. wands and potions, arson, tax evasion, counterfeiting, prison breaks, muggle harassment, potion smuggling, and graffitiAre you currently under pursuit by the Ministry of Magic?: YesWand: 11" Oak, Pheonix Feather core.Physical Description: Mackenzie is very tall, about 6' 4", and has light brown eyes. His thick brown hair is usually found gelled into various styles, accompanied by tanned skin. His nose is long and rounded, and his stature is strong, but he is not the fastest runner. He has wide brown eyebrows that are usually associated with his small mouth. Mackenzie smells like old spice and generally walks in a crouching position when thieving, but when in disguise, he stands tall. He is usually wearing dark clothing, because he would not like to stand out, and his favored color is grey. He does his best to blend in with muggles, and he succeeds almost every time; he has non- wizard accomplices that he uses as models as to how he should Personality Description: Mackenzie is fancied a loner, and is likely to be scowling at anyone he meets. He has very few accomplices in crime, and likes to work alone. He hates the world because of all the evil things it has done to his family. He is intelligent, plotting crimes with ease. He is never holding in how he feels, and anger is his bane. He tends to be mature and collected. He will almost never be spotted committing a crime for fun. He is constantly seeking revenge for people and organizations he hates. He is a cold, heartless person, Most of the time. His few friends are the only people who can cheer him up. Mackenzie is skilled as a criminal, he has had lots of practice as theiving is practically his profession. One thing he will usually be caught doing is vandalizing public property. Mackenzie is not one to be sloppy, so he tends to stay at the crime scene, adding finishing touches and whatnot, so authorities or whitnesses will usually catch him in the act. However, he has almost perfected his apparating skills, so he is rarely caught and turned in.He prefers to fly solo, and he thinks that other criminal organizations are foolish wastes of time. Mackenzie has low trust with people he is unfamiliar with, so allegiance to factions is fleeting. Mackenzie couldn't imagine a life without crime, being on the run and black market trade being things he is well-adjusted to. He has a life outside of his crimes, however. He has friends who have been kind to him, and when off-duty is usually looking in the news for his name or with his accomplices. (as he likes to call them) Mackenzie is most comfortable in vandalization and smuggling, and has no plans to expand his criminal abilities to anything else. Mackenzie thinks that he is quite good at what he does, and he is most likely correct, Considering the fact that he has practically devoted his life to what he does. The sole thing he needs to improve on is speed. He is sighted occationally completing his crimes, but has yet to be caught History: The poor Palmer MacDonald had many wives who had left him, before he met the faithful and loyal Milly Fraser. Milly loved Palmer, and always would, and Palmer felt the same. Palmer was married for the last time, and an only child was born. Mackenzie was a strange but funny child who loved to have fun. He lived in a rickety house with his mother and father. The family had little to no money, and all of Mackenzie's close relatives lived far away in Bantry, Ireland, so the MacDonald's young son usually had no one to play with; his father was always at work and his mother as well. But when they could be together, no family could have been tighter.However, the family began to crumble. Palmer fell deeply ill, and he passed, taking Milly with him. Mackenzie was then left alone in the property. He went to an orphanage; his aunts and uncles lacked responsibility and funds to support a child. Mackenzie began to have more sadness than happiness on a daily basis.When Hogwarts came into his view, he wasn't very happy about it. His years in the school of witchcraft and wizardry would have been the best years of his life if he wasn't an orphan in a lonely world, and instead of appreciating the services the school gave, he hated every bit of it, and failed most of his classes. He was a Gryffindor, and he hated everyone in his house. There were a few kids who wanted to befriend him, but he turned them away. He only wanted to be alone. So when the holidays came by, he stayed at Hogwarts, wanting minimal contact with people in general. He had poor relationships with his professors, due to his failing their classes and ignoring their teachings. Mackenzie visited his professors after class nearly every day for lectures about morals and what is funny and what is mean and whatever else he had done. He only had one class that he loved and excelled in. Defense Against the Dark Arts was his best class, especially since he got to expel his anger on evil creatures. His patronus was a wolf, and rightfully so. As a teenager, he was a prankster, dying robes purple and releasing magical creatures into the school. And the pranking carried on once he left Hogwarts, but in the form of crime and vandalization. His cover as a dragon keeper is not used too much, he prefers to stay hidden during the daylight hours. His few friends were the only light in his dark world, making him laugh and joking around with him. He only had fun with his buddies. His job as a dragon keeper is simply a profession he pretends to have, he is a smuggler, and earns money from illegal sales.Writing Sample: Sum up your character in one paragraph: Mackenzie is a cold-hearted, revenge-seeking man who has had all he loved ripped away from him. He is almost never smiling, and he is very strong and intelligent.[/font] Skip to next post
Mackenzie MacDonald: Criminal on August 10, 2012, 06:06:29 PM Your Nickname: LukeHave you read and do you agree to the Code of Conduct?: YesAre you over thirteen? YesHow did you find us and decide to write with us? FriendIf you have written other characters here: YesIf Yes, list them all: Rohan Graham, Emile LawsonIs this a Primary or Secondary Character?: PrimaryMackenzie MacDonald, CriminalFull Character Name: Mackenzie Malcolm MacDonald Character Birthday & Age: March 19th, 1983, 25.City & Country of Birth: Oulton Broad Sulffolk, EnglandBlood Purity: HalfbloodAlma Mater: HogwartsCover Job (If any): Dragon KeeperType of Criminal: Smuggler/VandalAllegiances / Loyalties / Political Faction: NoneHave they committed any previous crimes?: YesIf yes, what were they and were they convicted?: several vandalization crimes scattered around the ministry and other wizarding govt property, (although direct ministry attacks are nonexisistant)including graffiti, destruction of property, and, burning building and establishments, strictly wizarding, e.g. diagon alley stores and MoM phoneboothsWhat crimes might you commit in the future? Discuss all possible: Wand thieving, vandalizing MoM property, destroying Wizard property e.g. wands and potions, arson, tax evasion, counterfeiting, prison breaks, muggle harassment, potion smuggling, and graffitiAre you currently under pursuit by the Ministry of Magic?: YesWand: 11" Oak, Pheonix Feather core.Physical Description: Mackenzie is very tall, about 6' 4", and has light brown eyes. His thick brown hair is usually found gelled into various styles, accompanied by tanned skin. His nose is long and rounded, and his stature is strong, but he is not the fastest runner. He has wide brown eyebrows that are usually associated with his small mouth. Mackenzie smells like old spice and generally walks in a crouching position when thieving, but when in disguise, he stands tall. He is usually wearing dark clothing, because he would not like to stand out, and his favored color is grey. He does his best to blend in with muggles, and he succeeds almost every time; he has non- wizard accomplices that he uses as models as to how he should Personality Description: Mackenzie is fancied a loner, and is likely to be scowling at anyone he meets. He has very few accomplices in crime, and likes to work alone. He hates the world because of all the evil things it has done to his family. He is intelligent, plotting crimes with ease. He is never holding in how he feels, and anger is his bane. He tends to be mature and collected. He will almost never be spotted committing a crime for fun. He is constantly seeking revenge for people and organizations he hates. He is a cold, heartless person, Most of the time. His few friends are the only people who can cheer him up. Mackenzie is skilled as a criminal, he has had lots of practice as theiving is practically his profession. One thing he will usually be caught doing is vandalizing public property. Mackenzie is not one to be sloppy, so he tends to stay at the crime scene, adding finishing touches and whatnot, so authorities or whitnesses will usually catch him in the act. However, he has almost perfected his apparating skills, so he is rarely caught and turned in.He prefers to fly solo, and he thinks that other criminal organizations are foolish wastes of time. Mackenzie has low trust with people he is unfamiliar with, so allegiance to factions is fleeting. Mackenzie couldn't imagine a life without crime, being on the run and black market trade being things he is well-adjusted to. He has a life outside of his crimes, however. He has friends who have been kind to him, and when off-duty is usually looking in the news for his name or with his accomplices. (as he likes to call them) Mackenzie is most comfortable in vandalization and smuggling, and has no plans to expand his criminal abilities to anything else. Mackenzie thinks that he is quite good at what he does, and he is most likely correct, Considering the fact that he has practically devoted his life to what he does. The sole thing he needs to improve on is speed. He is sighted occationally completing his crimes, but has yet to be caught History: The poor Palmer MacDonald had many wives who had left him, before he met the faithful and loyal Milly Fraser. Milly loved Palmer, and always would, and Palmer felt the same. Palmer was married for the last time, and an only child was born. Mackenzie was a strange but funny child who loved to have fun. He lived in a rickety house with his mother and father. The family had little to no money, and all of Mackenzie's close relatives lived far away in Bantry, Ireland, so the MacDonald's young son usually had no one to play with; his father was always at work and his mother as well. But when they could be together, no family could have been tighter.However, the family began to crumble. Palmer fell deeply ill, and he passed, taking Milly with him. Mackenzie was then left alone in the property. He went to an orphanage; his aunts and uncles lacked responsibility and funds to support a child. Mackenzie began to have more sadness than happiness on a daily basis.When Hogwarts came into his view, he wasn't very happy about it. His years in the school of witchcraft and wizardry would have been the best years of his life if he wasn't an orphan in a lonely world, and instead of appreciating the services the school gave, he hated every bit of it, and failed most of his classes. He was a Gryffindor, and he hated everyone in his house. There were a few kids who wanted to befriend him, but he turned them away. He only wanted to be alone. So when the holidays came by, he stayed at Hogwarts, wanting minimal contact with people in general. He had poor relationships with his professors, due to his failing their classes and ignoring their teachings. Mackenzie visited his professors after class nearly every day for lectures about morals and what is funny and what is mean and whatever else he had done. He only had one class that he loved and excelled in. Defense Against the Dark Arts was his best class, especially since he got to expel his anger on evil creatures. His patronus was a wolf, and rightfully so. As a teenager, he was a prankster, dying robes purple and releasing magical creatures into the school. And the pranking carried on once he left Hogwarts, but in the form of crime and vandalization. His cover as a dragon keeper is not used too much, he prefers to stay hidden during the daylight hours. His few friends were the only light in his dark world, making him laugh and joking around with him. He only had fun with his buddies. His job as a dragon keeper is simply a profession he pretends to have, he is a smuggler, and earns money from illegal sales.Writing Sample: Sum up your character in one paragraph: Mackenzie is a cold-hearted, revenge-seeking man who has had all he loved ripped away from him. He is almost never smiling, and he is very strong and intelligent.[/font] Skip to next post
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